Tuesday, 9 June 2015

Writing Portfolio Sample

For writing we watched a video about a mouse that gets rejected and the finds an owner and our task was to write something similar, vaguely similar or the same. My story is about a cat. whatever my cat dreams it comes true. My goal is to write complex sentences. We had to put highlight the complex sentences red so they would stand out.

Big Idea: Here is fantastico story.

Feedback/Feedforward: I really like your story but I agree with you. You did go through lots of events pretty fast but it was really nice to read well done.- Mitchell

Evaluation: I think my story was very good but I skipped through lots of events so I need to babble on a bit more.

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