Wednesday, 26 August 2015

Writing Sample

Description: For writing this term our task was to write story and get inspiration from the picture below. since Mitchell and I had already started a story so we continued it with the new twist.

Big Idea: My goal is to add more detail to my sentences. I learnt how well I can work with someone.

Feedback/Feedforward:I like how you have explained your evaluation and your description. Next time you could add a little bit more to your big idea.

Evaluation: I think I did well on the story and on my goal but I think a little more detail would have been good next time I will work by myself so I can get better even more.

Thursday, 20 August 2015

Production: Wearable Art

For production this year our overall theme is Life. We are all split into 3 different groups. I am in Elements with Troy, my other options were Heroes and Villains with Rebecca or Out of Africa with Kate. In elements we had to choose out of four elements what we wanted to do, Air, Earth, Fire and Water. I am doing water.

Here is my mood board. 
Feedback/Feedforward: i really like your thinking your thinking out of the box i like your cultural thinking. But you need to use other patterns like fizz and Pisaz. nice work. -Jett

So far what I have done is at home I have been making an old man mask to show that the sea (my conscript is the sea now) is really old I will also spray paint popcorn to demonstrate coral. I have completed the end of my trident and have found some cardboard tubes to stick it onto.

Tuesday, 11 August 2015

Reverse it Up

For literacy we have 9 tasks called tic tac toes. We are all sorted into two groups questioning and summarizing I am in questioning. For this task we had name atleast 10 things a computer can't do.



3)Feed you 

4)Fly by itself

5)Contract disease

6)Function without energy

7)Grow facial hair

8)Swim freestyle

9)Be bowling ball

10)Float by itself

11)Be a dentist

12)survive lava

13)Have earwax

14)Be a pirate


15)Grow a monobrow

16)Play sport

17)Commit suicide

18)Physically knit

19)Build a house

20)Physically Use a computer

21)Physically use a bathroom 

22)Physically read a book

23)Physically Evacuate the building

24)Grow a ponytail

25)Physically cause global warming

26)Use a porta potty

27)Physically play the saxophone

Big Idea: We are learning to question the text this task helps us because we are questioning the computers abilities.

Feedback: I really like how you have explained everything and the fact that you have done more than the 20.-William
Feedfoward I really like how you have 27 things but since you are so close to 30 try go for 30.

Evaluation: I did well with my creative ideas but I probably could have had more on the list also I needed to put myself in the learning pit more.