Description: For writing this term our task was to write story and get inspiration from the picture below. since Mitchell and I had already started a story so we continued it with the new twist.
Big Idea: My goal is to add more detail to my sentences. I learnt how well I can work with someone.
Feedback/Feedforward:I like how you have explained your evaluation and your description. Next time you could add a little bit more to your big idea.
Evaluation: I think I did well on the story and on my goal but I think a little more detail would have been good next time I will work by myself so I can get better even more.